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3. 12/16/15, 04:20 am
Says: "Remove period before "In my experience...""
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2. 12/07/15, 02:14 am
Says: "Re: I hope that through this portfolio you will come to know me as a passionate dance artist and educator and the beliefs that make up my personal arts education perspective.
CONSIDER: AND BECOME FAMILIAR WITH, OR BECOME ACQUAINTED WITH OR LEARN MORE ABOUT THE BELIEFS THAT...."
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1. 09/09/15, 08:29 pm
Says: "I like the photo, but am not certain it is quite right for representing your portfolio - maybe because the black background does not inspire me. Get some feedback from others.
KI"
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